Character design: refining the design

I decided to thoroughly upload each step I take ( there are those INDEED helpful comments).
will be posting shortly. That is after recovering from "The Romanticism" .. :/ :D


Oh, so OK. I decided to equip my character whit mustaches, since ... eyebrows.. no, I didn't like the eyebrows . They didn't suited with this design (to my mind) But mustaches are equally expressive - I can imagine them zig-zagging when our French-looking guy is displeased with the fat-one's actions :D

And yes.. sketching the script. My... how I want to start with that :/