20 Jan 2010






Still thinking aBOUT THE LIGHTNING. tHE VIOLET ONE AT SOME POINT STARTS TO LOOK TOO PINKISH AND GIRLY :D :D bUT THE GREE-BLUE ONES .. TOO PLAIN.. HMM

THE FLOORS. IN MY CONCEPT DRAWING THEY HAD THIS REFLECTIVITY,BUT I'M NOT SURE IF IT LOOKS BETER THEN THE LAMBERT VERSION OF THE FLOORS. I GUESS I'M STARTING TO BE A BIT PICKY :D

AND I THINK ALL THE TEXTURES (THE DIRT, THE OLDNESS.. ) ARE ALL TO SILENT, MAYBE SOMETHING HAS TO STAND OUT ABIT MORE. fOR EXAMPLE THE CEILINGS COULD BE MORE ROTTEN.

AND MAYBE I COULD HERE AN OPINION ABOUT THE TEXTURE OF THE STUF RIGHT IN FRONT? ISN;T IT TO HEAVY?

AND THERE ARE FEW OTHER THINGS TO INCLUDE I THINK

7 comments:

  1. Bharathi Anthonysamy20 January 2010 at 20:40

    I see that you've rotated your scene, now u can add a backdrop behind the windows yhhhh???? I agree wit u kinda, the first one (blueish one) comes across (personally) as more effective as it evokes that 'eerie' feeling despite looking 'plain', I think only cus it makes me feel cold though, I dunno wht I'm saying, but definitely I felt something when I clicked on the blue image. Regarding the textures at the front, I can't pick between them because while the detailed one seems a bit unrealistic, the less detailed one comes across as a bit, I dunno, plain????

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  2. Yolantele20 January 2010 at 20:45

    Thanks :) you left an opinion abput all points that keep me concerned :D

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  3. Richard V-C20 January 2010 at 21:49

    First image for sure. I dont think the pinky one goes with the wallpaper and overall feel of the room. It makes it feel more warm.

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  4. Ruben Martins20 January 2010 at 23:58

    Jolanta, to solve the texture of the cloth, you need to know what material you using ifs is a old bed sheet, i no bump but you can add a bit of dirtyness on them, either paint or, apply a surface shader, just like the blood vessel tutorial or sort of.

    if you using a toilet towel, it has a bit of a bump just sligthly, to define those irregularities in it.

    also dont worry much about ones being ' bumpless', the further away from the camera the less bump you see :)

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  5. Yolantele21 January 2010 at 07:38

    some advice here! :D THANK YOU ALL!

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  6. Charlotte21 January 2010 at 16:51

    I personaly like the first image. If you think of what colours represent then the blue gives it more of a cold feel. Blue is used often to represent calmness but it also used for coldness to. Like Bharathi the blue lighting makes the room feel cold and creepy.

    I also like Ruben's idea of adding a bit of painted dirt onto your fabric :).

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  7. Eglė28 January 2010 at 19:33

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