Evening Jolanta - yes, the colours are much more 'communicative' now - BUT there remains a certain 'floaty' quality where the house meets the ground; currently it feels as if it's hovering, and not rooted to the damp, infertile earth; I'd suggest you might need more definition re. the ground, the horizon and the sky; the earth doesn't feel solid - it shares the characteristics of the sky; for me, it takes some strength and authority from the house? What do you think?
It is true i have work with the sky and horizont the least. And I find these examples only in working progress. ALso I was thinking how to create the ground, because in the descripction, the ground was covered in fogy mist, coming out of the lurid tarn. But yes, if a "strong and confident" house has no strong base he is placed than it's no "strong" house at all. Will work on it :) thank you
I love the grand look of this, very almighty. Reminds me of looking up at a church or tower, when you feel like you are going to fall back on yourself
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ReplyDeleteEvening Jolanta - yes, the colours are much more 'communicative' now - BUT there remains a certain 'floaty' quality where the house meets the ground; currently it feels as if it's hovering, and not rooted to the damp, infertile earth; I'd suggest you might need more definition re. the ground, the horizon and the sky; the earth doesn't feel solid - it shares the characteristics of the sky; for me, it takes some strength and authority from the house? What do you think?
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ReplyDeleteIt is true i have work with the sky and horizont the least. And I find these examples only in working progress. ALso I was thinking how to create the ground, because in the descripction, the ground was covered in fogy mist, coming out of the lurid tarn. But yes, if a "strong and confident" house has no strong base he is placed than it's no "strong" house at all. Will work on it :) thank you
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